话说前段时间,正直寒假,鄙人每天在家不是看美剧就是写作业。后来在《Angels & Demons》的影响下,鄙人在本子上耗时10分钟,完成了09年大作《UNTITLED》!!!!
顶顶顶顶~~
这首诗比较好玩的就是,它每一段押一个韵(请注意没句话的最后一个单词),慢慢的读出来就有感觉咯~
但是,不得不说,这首诗为了一味的追求押韵,写得非常牵强,惋惜之~
诗在下面,大家可以围观一下无业人士消磨时间的结果(本人不会对下文所描述的内容发表评论):
UNTITLED
I want to stand by you side by side
Because you are the apple of my eyes
Your behaviour are so glamorous
And you make me feel so marvellous
Your hair are so smooth
That my eyes can't even move
I feel jealous even when you talk to people
Because to me you are the one that's noble
I don't care how you think of me
Coz I know you are the one that meant to be
I know you might forget me one day
But you'll in my heart all the way
I found love is hard to define
When I look through your eyes
You are the one & only that I love
No one can replace you in my heart
I love you until
The world stood still
Because you are the apple of my eyes
Your behaviour are so glamorous
And you make me feel so marvellous
Your hair are so smooth
That my eyes can't even move
I feel jealous even when you talk to people
Because to me you are the one that's noble
I don't care how you think of me
Coz I know you are the one that meant to be
I know you might forget me one day
But you'll in my heart all the way
I found love is hard to define
When I look through your eyes
You are the one & only that I love
No one can replace you in my heart
I love you until
The world stood still
个人觉得写得最不怎么样的就是“Your behaviour are so glamorous/And you make me feel so marvellous”和“Your hair are so smooth/That my eyes can't even move”两句。
前者太长,读起来和整首诗的和谐之风不符阿~
后面那个因为要押smooth和move的韵(我一般是先想到押韵词的),所以写的很牵强,感觉前后没什么关系。
还有就是,那个Coz是because的简写,这个大家应该都知道。因为如果写because,那就句子长短不一致了~
最后一句,the world stood still,是来自于基努李维斯的新片,The Day The World Stood Still,地球停转之日(好想看啊啊啊~~)。
PS:
前者太长,读起来和整首诗的和谐之风不符阿~
后面那个因为要押smooth和move的韵(我一般是先想到押韵词的),所以写的很牵强,感觉前后没什么关系。
还有就是,那个Coz是because的简写,这个大家应该都知道。因为如果写because,那就句子长短不一致了~
最后一句,the world stood still,是来自于基努李维斯的新片,The Day The World Stood Still,地球停转之日(好想看啊啊啊~~)。
PS:
GOOGLE的情人节LOGO(好漂亮阿)

这个LOGO在发布7小时过后又突然被一个小鸟的替换,搞不清为什么~(而且新的很难看)